In this...

In this deceptive world,

Nothing is trusted to be true and real.

In this place of chaos,

people expect only peace after all...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

True and worthwhile words. I believe the mistake of all people everywhere. We believe things without researching. We want and need peace. We must work for peace. Thank you my friend for sharing the powerful and worthwhile poetry.
Coyote

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Too true for the cruel world. I wish everyone understood the metaphor. Then the world would have been a better place.

Good work!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much mehreen....weneva i see ur reviews i tell my mum that there's a girl named fahmida...just bcuz evn my mum'z name is fahmida

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Aww that is very sweet. Didn't know that, of course! Do convey my salaam to her. It is my pleasure to read your works and say something optimistic about it because that is what it calls for. :)

Stay well and bless you.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much...sure i will...
stay blessed u too

[apennylate]

Aye, that they do... Deception rules all but the most stalwart of honest ways... Well penned...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks sooo much dear...

[apennylate]

Sooo very welcome, friend

[duff]

Great expectations and hope. Through dire times hope is all we have. The low crowding our vibe. We have a choice to give into the pitfalls or we can die trying to climb out of them. We all have a choice I guess. I really like this.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

truly said....thanks duff!

[duff]

My pleasure:)

[Dania Msallam]

Short words but i really like it
Great poem!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much dear...

[Accalia]

Wow what a impact. This poem was short but to the point...I liked It it was a great poem! Thank you for sharing, and keep on writing!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much friend....i will.

[Nora]

This is so true 😢 every one expect the peace but never thought about how could he stop this **** choas which surrounding him 😢
Great poem wajiha❤

[Wajiha Nayeem]

Thnks so much deary...

[Nora]

You are welcome 💖

[z.chéri]

I love this! This could have easily been made to be longer or more descriptive. Although, it is wonderful as it is. It paints a picture of how this society and word is today. Very glad there are wonderful writers like you out there! Keep writing! x

[Wajiha Nayeem]

Awww...thank you so muchhhhh!!!💛💛

[WoodenChair]

this poem is so good, easily in my top 30,000 or so poems! my no.1 poem

[Wajiha Nayeem]

Aww...thanks so much....😊😊

[Bear]

Thinking about it we have evolved to the point where we seem to need a little chaos to feel comfortable. Without the sounds of traffic or industry the silence deafens us so we turn to TV and music to satisfy our evolved need for chaos. Great idea and one that inspires me so I will most likely barrow the idea :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much bear!