Shy...

just a feeling..

I was a shy girl,

a girl who cried for little things...

I was a weak girl,

my strengths were hidden somewhere...

I hated coming on to the stage and speak,

because, i hated too many audience!

But now,

I am no more shy,

and a bold girl...

ready to face the world,

ready to stand and take initiative!

I am strong now,

i now have a control on my mind...

now, i show my talents!

I now love to come onto the stage,

and speak..without fearing what the audience would say!!

I am now,

my true self...

the one i had to find,

the one i had to be...

I have found me!

Reviews

[Mr.Writer]

Wow, that was... unique and awesome!
So inspirational and gives readers some hope to improve and succeed in life...
Keep it up

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much....am glad you loved it.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[duff]

Shun the outside noise for a moment to realize the sound and beat rest inside of you. A realization of strength and internal happiness. Happiness found from truth and being you. An enjoyable read for sure. Nicely done.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank so much for the beautiful review...

[duff]

You are very welcome

[Bear]

Critique: (because, i hated too many audience!) There are many issues within this sentence the first is you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction "because". Next is the "i" should be capitalized "I" you should go back and capitalize all the i, then there is a wording issue "too many audience!" consider "too large an audience" so (because I hated too large an audience!)

Review: I love the inspirational message and the way you encourage without being negative, this shows good maturity for a 16 year old. Are you taking any or do you plan to take and psychology classes? If not you might think about it as you show an understanding of the human mind and its affecting behavior. Masterfully done my friend, Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! and yes I am giving it six out of five Clap!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahah...thanks so much bear for the lovely review and am really glad that you took initiative and corrected me where i went wrong..!!..this review will surely help me build my writing skills more!....thanks bear.
keep reviewing and loving my work and do correct my mistakes!!

[Bear]

Let me offer you a link to the best writing tool I have come across https://app.grammarly.com/ I hope you find it as useful as I have :~)

[sabinn]

an inspiring ... and beautiful one

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much sabinn...

[Najam Us Saher]

Inspiring....one always finds their strength in the most unexpected way and at unexpected times....

[Wajiha Nayeem]

yes saher...i agree with u...thanks so much!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Hope]

I am happy for you Wajiha:)
A great poem!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much dear...

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

This is a very motivational poem. I love your idea od bolding the motivational part. You indirectly emphasizing it. That was great

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much Hasventhran...(no mistake in ur name this tym).....hahah

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

Hahahaha...

[Surya]

Hahaha...you were shy But it doesn't seems so.....But you found who u r....I appreciate for that....
I loved it dear...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

haahaaha...thanks su...

[Priyanshi]

hey, Your writing is enough to inspire me...really I found it a motivating piece. always keep writing and keep smiling, brave girl.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahah...thank you so much girl..

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wow that's an amazing piece of art...
I'm truly glad that you found yourself
Not everyone succeed to find themselves and their hidden abilities..i loved that line
"I now love to come onto the stage,
and speak..without fearing what the audience would say!!" That's really good..others opinions or their comments should not bothers us but to give some lessons in our journey..
Amazing Work

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much farhan.....your review made me smile wide!!...thanks soo much.