Ah, I love the last stanza. Well...I guess...'arrogance' would have been a better word there, in place of pride...but, that's fine too. Talking about the poem, it was indeed inspiring. Wise words...keep writing!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
thank you so much zoe....am glad you did suggest me with a word instead and thanks dear for reviewin.. read morethank you so much zoe....am glad you did suggest me with a word instead and thanks dear for reviewing and liking my work.
Hey, that's like my friend....it's an inspiring poem....I really loved it so much....I'll waiting to read other such motivating poems...so keep on writing and smile...
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
thanks so much priyu.....i will surely write more of them.
Great wisdom shared.
"stand ahead,
keep your head high,
but, yes my dear,
show no pride!."
I agree with the above lines. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
thank you so much coyote...am really happy that you reviewed!!.....thanks again.
"...but, yes my dear, show no pride!" Excellent lead-in to the very real struggle of women everywhere. I really liked this and until I joined this site was not a real reader and certainly not a critic of poetry. I'm learning, and the good ones are really inspiring me to take a shot at it. Well done.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
thanks so much Carol..thanks for the kind visit...and the encouraging review...
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