I....

when there was always someone to be by your side and they suddenly move apart....we feel melancholy and depressed....! and we never even know, whether they even miss us the way we do!

 I used to walk miles,

without even getting tired...

i had a thirst,

a thirst of love and support!

Finally,

after a long journey....

i was granted with a blessing,

a blessing i never wanted to let go!

I was happy,

i knew that nothing would take away my love...

the roses bloomed,

the sun shone and the beautiful dew drops shined on the delicate petals..

i could see love everywhere!

my happiness had no limits,

and my love seemed to be walking with me always..

we were never tired,

loved each other,

no,there was nothing fake...

but, all of a sudden,

came a storm.

that destroyed my roses !

all around me i could see was just dry and brown sand.

All the colors had faded away,

leaving my heart broken in grief and pain...

i wanted to turn away,

no more hope i had,

i was enough for i had loved all my life,

and I in return received just pain...

Somewhere in my heart i had a belief,

that the roses will bloom again,

and the sunshine will cut the dark and straight come my way!

but, nothing happened so....

i don't know how all that had happened,

leaving me alone,all by myself,

my heart kept beating,

i never felt anger or rage...

i was just surprised..

because now, i have lost my destiny, my way!!

Reviews

[z.chéri]

you are talented and this is lovely! Keep writing! - Melody x

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much...

[sabinn]

thats what the feelings are i truely understand you... there are hard time and sometimes the sun doesnt shine but life still goes on :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

yes sabinn, thank you so much.

[Priyanshi]

Poem is really good, Wajiha.
I can understanding through what kind of situation u are passing through....your poem tells it...but all i can say is just smile.....never lose hope, dear....You're are one of my sweetest friend, Wajiha....smile, my friend.
I always love reading your work,Keep on writing.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks s much priyu!

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, dear.

[Mr.Writer]

It's a beautiful, heart wrenching poem on the different emotions one experiences...
Keep it up :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank u so much shaan...

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Surya]

Every night ends dear with a beautiful sunrise....
It's necessary to feel pain to know the worth of love....
And am sure good days will be back again...
Am here to help you out....if u r in rage kick me out, if u feel lonely hug me, if u feel discouraged smile with me, if u feel sad just remember I will give u a slap...so no worries everything gonna be fine....
Poem is worth reading, well penned and you did an amazing job here...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you su....i know you're going to be there wimme in all the good times and also the storms....am really happy really happy to have you as my best friend.....!...THANKS DEAR!

[Surya]

Did you said that?...
I will kick you now, no thanks sweetness, even am happy to get u as my frnd...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hehe...madness u r!

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

my happiness had no limits,
and my love seemed to be walking with me always..

This was a beautiful line. The poem had a beautiful presentation. Good work

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much bhaskaran....am glad you loved my work.

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

Hahahaha...Baskaran is not my last name.It's my father's name

[Najam Us Saher]

Feel like you have written this for me....I know how you feel I can understand and truly feel it....I give you no false hope telling that the person will return or something like that but I will surely tell you from my own experience that you will be blessed with love and will fall in love with a deserving person...just have faith and give love another chance....

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much...hope so saher!. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome....everything will be okay as long as you have hope...

[Sofia]

Beautiful poem! I liked it very much!!
Good job!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much dear!

[Sofia]

You're welcome 😊

[rowan.taylorrr]

awh I really like this. it is very relatable as losing happiness can happen so easily sadly, I really like he way this transitioned. well work!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you soo much.glad you loved it!

[Hope]

This is a good poem Wajiha:)
I can see the events as you describe.
Great work!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much naat!

[Hope]

My pleasure