I....

when there was always someone to be by your side and they suddenly move apart....we feel melancholy and depressed....! and we never even know, whether they even miss us the way we do!

 I used to walk miles,

without even getting tired...

i had a thirst,

a thirst of love and support!

Finally,

after a long journey....

i was granted with a blessing,

a blessing i never wanted to let go!

I was happy,

i knew that nothing would take away my love...

the roses bloomed,

the sun shone and the beautiful dew drops shined on the delicate petals..

i could see love everywhere!

my happiness had no limits,

and my love seemed to be walking with me always..

we were never tired,

loved each other,

no,there was nothing fake...

but, all of a sudden,

came a storm.

that destroyed my roses !

all around me i could see was just dry and brown sand.

All the colors had faded away,

leaving my heart broken in grief and pain...

i wanted to turn away,

no more hope i had,

i was enough for i had loved all my life,

and I in return received just pain...

Somewhere in my heart i had a belief,

that the roses will bloom again,

and the sunshine will cut the dark and straight come my way!

but, nothing happened so....

i don't know how all that had happened,

leaving me alone,all by myself,

my heart kept beating,

i never felt anger or rage...

i was just surprised..

because now, i have lost my destiny, my way!!

Reviews

[The Exiled Wolf]

Sadly those who are destined to stay in your life are much fewer than those who aren't. People come and go too often - that one day you won't feel the pain anymore. Hope you can find a shelter at last!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much....am glad you loved it.

[Saumya]

People who aren't meant to stay forever in our lives, Don't...That's the harsh truth. No matter how hard we try to make them stay, they won't, and even if they do, they aren't much bothered bout how we feel for them... Therefore it's better to let go of people who don't wish to stay in our lives anymore! It's obviously hard, and may take years, but that sometimes become mandatory.Before they leave you in disgust, forever, know that they aren't bothered anymore by their mere ignorance and careless.
Most people today, don't want friends or lover's forever, and those who try to be one, suffers, and suffers badly...And that takes years or may be the whole life to come out from.


Thankyou for sharing your thoughtful poem!

-Saumya.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hey..thanks dear..your reviews are really encouraging !

[Saumya]

Thankyou, I'm glad you like them😊

[Nora]

The key of this poem is the imagination, you could imagine the cycle of love perfectly and smoothly at the same time, well done 👏

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much dear...am glad to see your review.

[Nora]

You're welcome 💖💖

[WoodenChair]

wow wowowow woowowowow i'm in love with this piece of poetry cant wait to read it again

[Wajiha Nayeem]

Ohhh....aaahh!!!
Thank you so muchhhh....😊😊😊😊

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wow this is such a beautiful piece of work..keep it up wajiha..☺

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much farhan.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Ur welcome

[Psychotic Lily]

Hits right where it hurts! We know this story to well since we all go through it. Wonderful write keep on writing!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thnks so much dear!

[Coyote Poetry]

Life and love do teach us lessons. Some good and some bad. I liked the journey in the poetry. You took the reader with and I felt the joy and I felt the sadness in your words. Thank my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much coyote...your words are always encouraging....!

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad and you are welcome.

[APOORVA]

claps!
claps!
claps!
admirable content!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much dear!

[Abhishek Asthana]

just portrayed all your feelings,,, it's grief-stricken write but i would say one should try to find out the thousands reasons to smile if he/she has got few reasons to cry... just remember that...
nicely written wajiha

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much abhi...

[Mamta Sonowal]

Such an heart touching poem tht u written. Truly it is such an amazing poem. Keep writing such types of poem tht heart melts.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thnkk you so much dear...am glad you loved it.

[Mamta Sonowal]

Ur most welc'me dear...