My sadness comes out only in the night!

The tears roll down my cheeks,

and my pillow gets wet...

i have a thick blanket over me,

so that no one notices i wept!

why is it getting tough for me everyday?

have i lost you or are you still there?

 i need you and nothing else!!

i sometimes want you to be away from me,

and sometimes i want you to hug me tight!

these days i am not myself and i feel no delight.

Reviews

[Hope]

I can relate to this..
Its a touching and true work.
When we miss sb, we feel all down.
Keep writing, dear.....:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much friend....

[Hope]

My pleasure

[Suhd]

have I lost you or are you still there? The same I think about when I miss somebody. Splendid poem.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much...

[Coyote Poetry]

Old wise saying. If we do. We will lose. If we don't. We will still lose. The below lines are represent by this saying.
"i sometimes want you to be away from me,
and sometimes i want you to hug me tight!
these days i am not myself and i feel no delight."
I liked the above lines. Real life and true. Thank you Wajiha for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Wajiha Nayeem]

haha..thanks so much friend!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[duff]

Sad and touching. An emotionally charged piece that's well written. Nicely done

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much duff!

[duff]

You're very welcome!

[Nora]

Sad but amazing " i have a thick blanket over me,
so that no one notices i wept! " l loved that line so much😊

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much love!

[Nora]

You're welcome 😊

[Surya]

Love makes so....but let go what ever happens...What goes around comes around...I loved it...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much su!!

[apennylate]

Sadly put, but at least a pillow can soothe... Heh... Heart-breakingly penned...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

yes dear....thank you sooo much!

[apennylate]

Aye, so very welcome...!

[Psychotic Lily]

I like this one very emotional keep up the good work XD

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so so much....

[Priyanshi]

This poem is somewhere true, many people do that in love and you explained it so beautifully....I loved it.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much dear!

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure.

[Donicca Dona L]

love makes us feel sometimes'' not ourselfs'' but it's still a beautiful feeling.
ahh baby I need you and nothing else.
You are enough to make day brighter.

love it!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

yes that's so very true...thank you so much Dona!