leave it on him...

i seldom can sleep,

i often keep wondering!

i wanted nothing,

not even sunshine...

all i wanted was,

your smile...

that i feel everyday!

distant our relationship is,

but, you're still near me...

and i love each thing about this journey.

 

so, my love...

let's leave it on the planner of our destiny,

let's leave it on HIM...

Reviews

[Surya]

Sometimes it's better to leave few things for destiny.....I enjoyed it...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks suu....

[Mr.Writer]

This poem is special :)
Engaging, beautiful, delicate and strong!
Keep it up :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much..shaan!

[Rassoul]

I love how you ended it, nice job Wajiha!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much, omar

[Donicca Dona L]

wow the last line let's leave it on HIM. sounded like a prayer to me, a prayer for an answer.
I really loved reading this beautiful .

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much dear!!

[karina]

yayy girl!! told ya! you write gr8 poems :*

[Wajiha Nayeem]

haahhaha...you seem to be the happiest!...thank you so much for loving my poetry!

[karina]

yeahh i am!! its your work that makes us so happy :)