girl across the hall

sparkling blue eyes almost like the sky

when you look in them you want to take a ride

i fell as if i could cry

as if my brain would fry

if a look into her gems of eyes

but its not all about the eyes you see

 its about the connection between her and me

when we talk i want to fall

because she is the most beautiful girl across the hall

 

Author's Note

this isnt about me its about my best friend and who he used to crush on

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is sweet :) And does give a perfect imagery throughout the poem.
Great job!


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Tasha]

Wow, this was beautiful and it was perfect imagery.