Yes, this commanding voice is indispensable now.
The neglect and indifference has gone too much.
The polite words are deemed as the sign of weakness .
If the conscience of the peoples is arisen the world may turn safe again for living.
Thank you Wendy for the harsh yet useful sermon.
That's cool. The style wasn't what I expected from the first poem I read from you, but It's attenti.. read moreThat's cool. The style wasn't what I expected from the first poem I read from you, but It's attention-getting. I hope you did well in the contest.
7 Years Ago
I really don't think I won. Like I said, poems really aren't my thing.
Yes, this commanding voice is indispensable now.
The neglect and indifference has gone too much.
The polite words are deemed as the sign of weakness .
If the conscience of the peoples is arisen the world may turn safe again for living.
Thank you Wendy for the harsh yet useful sermon.
This is great! You're singing my song. We live in a throw-away society. And I totally agree with the watching the sky and listening to nature bit. That's why I feel sorry for folks living in overcrowded, polluted and noisy cities. Where we live the stars are sharp as razors and we hear coyotes, birds and our milk goats. I diverge a little on the bags. Some plastic is organically based and biodegradable. Plus, paper products come from a renewable resource (which would be better utilized if they planted more trees). I love the idea of reusable bags, as well as other containers. What happened to glass milk bottles and peaches 'canned' in Mason jars?
Posted 12 Years Ago
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I really like this. It's very simple and very effective. You have written some very wise suggestions. Thank you for sharing :)
Do I HAVE to turn off the loud music??? Stop watching TV...hmmm
those would be true sacrifices that I don't think I'm ready to give up...quite yet, though I do commune with nature whenever I can. (Being a product of the 60's you know..and do everything else...and then some..
It's the "then somes" I would have liked to see a little more of in this write...for a more profound and powerful impact.
I liked what you started....just fell a bit short, Wendy
Great message and style though..enjoyed!
allen
Awesome poem with a very positive message. I like this1
Posted 12 Years Ago
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As this is perfect, such a piece that flows almost as a collab into my last piece. I think you have a great mind and soul. Thinking of all that could be said before it's to late, precious, I dig this. As I recognize my own thoughts within your words.