Pansy Secret

Pansy nodding head in summer breeze.

Purple pansy faces

Summer breezes nodding heads

Thinking secret thoughts

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I like how you personify the Pansy but still keep an organic feel. It has the energy and natural nuances that really take into account what makes the soul of this flower. I can only imagine that it was an astute observer or a gardener who penned this poem--well done.

[Jolie Blossom]

You give the flowers life :)

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Why thank you, Jolie!

[A. V. Madison]

The energy flows neatly and nicely. I really enjoyed this piece. Bravo.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Why thank y!

[Marie]

Actually, this is a haiku--now that I count the syllables...

[Wendy Seames Garner]

This is one of those cases where what I thought I had written - wasn't. I have since changed it.

[Renée]

What a pretty image !

[Archia]

Pansy's are such pretty flowers. I like how it's made to seem seem like the flowers have a mind to their own, personifies that's the word I'm looking for. It's personified, and it makes me wonder what a flower would think. Wonderful haiku.

[Muse]

I can almost see this pansy smiling. Very quaint...very clever.

[Pencrafter]

I love simple statements like this. It reminds me of Sandburg (probably wrong person and spelling, sorry) when he talks about the fog walking as a cat. Your poem of three lines tells more than some of my short stories. Write on!

[Cree Nations]

Very cute...simple yet speaks volumes.

[kingblaq]

so much beauty in so few words

[MOON]

Lovely purple pansy prose.