At Least, I Hope So

At Least, I Hope So

A Poem by vydenmyria

Mother texts the wife to ask if I'm OK.
I'm OK, mom.
At least, I hope so.
I'll never really know for sure.

Listening to The Smiths
and photo-shopping vacation photos
so that others think my life is just grand.
If they only really had a clue.
But they never will, 
because I have nothing to share
to those that pretend to care.

Right now I feel like a pin-less grenade.
It's the timer that has me intrigued,
at least for the moment.
But when it blows,
I'll go...

At least, I hope so...

© 2016 vydenmyria


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It's the timer that has me intrigued. That is a fascinating and sinister line all in one. Depression is a monster, living and breathing. It is fluid as it ebbs and flows the pulling out of surf before the tsunami. It is devastation. We find our high ground - that is my hope for those who deal with the abyss.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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vydenmyria

8 Years Ago

So nice to see that you are still around here, you were always there to comment on my much better wo.. read more



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It's the timer that has me intrigued. That is a fascinating and sinister line all in one. Depression is a monster, living and breathing. It is fluid as it ebbs and flows the pulling out of surf before the tsunami. It is devastation. We find our high ground - that is my hope for those who deal with the abyss.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vydenmyria

8 Years Ago

So nice to see that you are still around here, you were always there to comment on my much better wo.. read more

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Added on April 22, 2016
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