The perfect woman.

Love at first sight.

I stood in the dark gazing at the endless beauty of the moon.

The dark cloud almost nearing the moon is going to veil it soon.

Suddenly from the darkness appeared a woman in a white robe.

She was the perfect woman. Rapidly for her did my heart throb.

 

I have never felt alive in my dormant life until this night

I saw a beauty comparable to that of the moon in my sight.

Her presence began to change me; it gave my life a meaning.

She made me want to rebuild my life again from the beginning.

 

All my senses yearned for her. My eyes were wide open adoring her.

I kept looking into her eyes, thousands of sweet emotions it began to stir.

I could hear a thousand symphonies as she passed me by.

The trance inducing scent of the women gave me wings to fly.

 

I want this to be a fairy tale, where we fall in love forever.

 Loving her deeply everyday, more than ever.

 Yearning for the touch of her lips, warmth of her embrace,

 the gaze into her eyes  and waking up everyday seeing her face.

Author's Note

I enjoyed writing this piece,hope you enjoy guys enjoy reading this too.

Reviews

[The Dreamer]

WOOWW!!! LOVED IT :) - i liked this the most among ally our writings.
the rhyming scheme was really good - gave a good flow to the poem , making it almost melodious. when i read the first 2 lines itself - i knew it was going to be wonderful. "The dark cloud almost nearing the moon is going to veil it soon." beautiful imagery. :)

[vspjaguar]

you have no idea how happy I am reading this review,Thanks a lot :D

[imdvader]

awesome poem bro!

[vspjaguar]

Thanks a lot!

[rnuff]

Such a hopeful amazing write, like the rhyme scheme.

[vspjaguar]

Thanks a lot!