A Feeling LostA Poem by VoxharmonyFrom the perspective of three; let me know what you think..The Ground who will catch And with that, my breath was smothered. After such panicked
struggle, the contrast in the air that flowed above me was deathly strong. I
saw their souls slip away as they came to me; first on their knees, and then to
my face. Their bodies emanate now dwindling warmth; I summon the wind to pull
my blanket of leaves upon their exposed and ruptured backs. I weakened my
surface to cradle the innocents, and inherently absorbed their red iron taste
into the dampness of my face. Their stillness draws attention to the tremors from the stepping of many boots across my plain. I hold them in their frozen gaze,
apart from this task helpless to aid their grave fate. Like me, none of the
beings still here after the sound of the fire will not feel anything anymore.
The Fox who will witness And with that, my breath was sharpened. From my hiding
place I felt the tremor of the merciless shots that had been the couple’s end.
My copper fur stood on edge as I sensed the evil in the air. Overwhelmed with
questions and pity, I heard their souls slip away as the humans fell in despair
to their knees, and then to their faces. The uniformed murderers turned away
indifferently as a gentle yet bone chilling breeze blew a slight cloak of
fallen leaves over the innocents. Though not exposed I could smell the red,
life holding metal that now drained from their unnaturally still forms. The uniforms now walked away, and I tilted my
head as I recognized the ugly pride and lack of remorse that swarmed around
their heads. Approaching the two I saw fall, I tried to understand why the
humans turned with such evil upon their own kind. Placing myself between the
two faces paralyzed in dread and love, I knew it must be because those men,
those uniforms, could not feel anything anymore.
The Victim who is Silenced And with that, my breath was gone. The last site viewed with life in my
eyes was the fleeing and the falls of the others, of my love. I felt my soul
slip away as my body fell to its knees, then to the ground. An inhuman stillness
washed over me as my flesh collided with the damp earth. My darling lies beside
me now, she possesses the same stillness as I, and our icy eyes forever peer
through each other. I’m heartbroken that our last memory together was this
terror of discovery, of condemnation of our people. Now in the distance,
footsteps pound the ground upon which we lie; their echo sending tremors
through the earth into my lifelessness. At least here on the ground I am free
of that impaling agony that, along with my blood, drained the soul from my
body. But I can also no longer feel the
cherished gaze of my love. I cannot feel anything anymore. © 2012 VoxharmonyAuthor's Note
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Added on August 21, 2012 Last Updated on August 21, 2012 Tags: death, sad, perspective, war, lovers AuthorVoxharmonyCanadaAboutWhy hello there! I'm an experimental writer, struggling to find my ambition and my niche. I'd love some reviews and feedback. Some people write for themselves, some for others, I for both. Let me kn.. more..Writing
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