In A Moment

In A Moment

A Poem by Voxharmony
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Scribbled in a notebook during my freshman year of uni, yet I still find this piece quite relevant, and quite passionate. Let me know what you think... :)

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Blurry Echoes forever lingering,
                Struck by their passing,
that is when I fear them the most.
     Such beautiful encounters; find beauty in
                                simplicity.
Create the thread of intimacy,
that I view as so sacred
                        to bare.
May they never be forgotten, may they never
be scoffed,
           As tragedy would then seer its mark
on every beautiful smile
                         that was.
Oh the risks
to love,                           to expose
the soul to its most
                     notorious destroyer
            Yet,
to breathe within the moment,
the moment that will be added to that collection,
      is the most blissful scene;
                       Oh how it brings me peace.

© 2012 Voxharmony


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I love the visual style of you poem. Yet I don't really have a sense (if you believe that I have any sense) that what you have written requires such distractions. You have a powerful message but it becomes cluttered with this stylish portrayal. I do however like your storyline and the imagery created. Thank you

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Voxharmony

12 Years Ago

Thank you, and yes I see what you mean. The piece was originally written via pencil and paper in the.. read more



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Lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the visual style of you poem. Yet I don't really have a sense (if you believe that I have any sense) that what you have written requires such distractions. You have a powerful message but it becomes cluttered with this stylish portrayal. I do however like your storyline and the imagery created. Thank you

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Voxharmony

12 Years Ago

Thank you, and yes I see what you mean. The piece was originally written via pencil and paper in the.. read more

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Added on August 10, 2012
Last Updated on August 12, 2012
Tags: love, heartbreak, romance, angst, peace, frustration, moment, life, passion, fear, beautiful, risks, tragedy, intimacy

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Voxharmony
Voxharmony

Canada



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Why hello there! I'm an experimental writer, struggling to find my ambition and my niche. I'd love some reviews and feedback. Some people write for themselves, some for others, I for both. Let me kn.. more..

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