Oh You Fragile Boy

upon watching my child's heart be broken

Oh you fragile boy

You try to be so tough

But I see under that paper thin veneer

 

It may be the first

But it certainly won't be the last

Your heart is broken

 

You think I did not see

That tear slide silently down your face

Under that thick mop of hair

 

My heart breaks for you

I loved her too

First loves are never forgotten

 

 

Reviews

[DarbyDarby;;]

The heart is so fragile. First loves really are never forgotten, it's true. This is very heartfelt, and sad, though hope inspiring. I enjoyed reading it.

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

awwww!!!! that was sweet!!!

[The Mad Prophet]

Wow, nice. Incouraging. Who this was ment for should be so lucky and motivated in not giving up the chance for another. Nice flow, very precise as well.