Dreams and wishes

Dreams and wishes

A Poem by Christina Carpenter


I had dreams about you
But now they won’t come true
I had wishes on the stars
But now they’re gone
 
I’m so confused without you
I don’t know what to do
You’re my savior who once was
But now is gone.

You’re my hero who saved me 
In those days long ago
Please come save me once more
For your last goodbyes

You’re my star who burns bright in the night of my life. (2x)
 
I had dreams about you 
But now they won’t come true
I had wishes on the stars
But now they’re gone.

I was lost, but you found me 
Bringing me love once more
But you left to far away 
And told me just to stay

But you didn’t take all of you
You left a piece in my heart
I feel like you’re off
 in Never Never Land
 
But you’ll come back and save me again
My life with you was a fairy tale
But I haven’t found my happily ever after
But I found my never-ending story

I had dreams about you
But now they won’t come true
I had wishes on the stars
But now they’re gone. <3

© 2014 Christina Carpenter


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It's a cool song, I liked this one phrase

You’re my hero who saved me
In those days long ago
Please come save me once more
For your last goodbyes

Nice write, I think you were missing yer cool love much right from the depth of yer smooth heart. Your thoughts about love're cool. I enjoyed the theme, words're clear touched mah heart. I loved the title ..
Keep on dear, Chrisssss-Tina-Nina!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christina Carpenter

10 Years Ago

Haha thanks! I like that phrase too :)



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A nice song. Thank you for sharing...:)...............

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved the song! It would be nice if you could post some audio as well, that would be wonderful! Keep writing! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christina Carpenter

10 Years Ago

Thanks! And I'll try to work on that :)
Devesh

10 Years Ago

You're welcome! :) Looking forward to it, then! :)
It's a cool song, I liked this one phrase

You’re my hero who saved me
In those days long ago
Please come save me once more
For your last goodbyes

Nice write, I think you were missing yer cool love much right from the depth of yer smooth heart. Your thoughts about love're cool. I enjoyed the theme, words're clear touched mah heart. I loved the title ..
Keep on dear, Chrisssss-Tina-Nina!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christina Carpenter

10 Years Ago

Haha thanks! I like that phrase too :)

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Christina Carpenter
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Love to write songs, especially with one of my best friends. In choir, play volleyball, piano, and guitar. Sophomore in Oklahoma. Thanks for looking at my stuff, I appreciate any reviews, especially s.. more..

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