The Box

I long for the days

of the comforting box

when there was no pain

no emotions at all

 

Those simple solutions

that so comforted others

those clichee lines

that solved all their problems

 

They seem so trivial, so unreal

the only solution I can see

is to smash them to bits

Glue them back together

And hope it all fits

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Leah Maldonado]

very simple yet interesting.
if you were going to revise this (i'll not saying you should) I think you sould add more detail to what your main focus is.
But I like it they way it is.
Leah