what is depression?

what is depression?

A Poem by Kristen

depression

i was asked what it was like
I said "if you must know"


"  
it's like I'm being pulled underwater by a strong current that I can't fight off, and the farther and farther I get pulled down, everyone around me is telling me to 'just get out of the water'. 
yet none of them hold out their hand to help pull me in

 I can't just get out of the water, the current is too strong

sometimes I find a rock to lean on for a while, but when I get too tired of holding myself up, every time I let go, I think to myself it would all be easier if I just let the current pull me under

letting me drown "

© 2015 Kristen


Author's Note

Kristen
I know this is similar to another work I've done on depression, but pretend it's new.

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It's life unfortunately. Nicely written!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love your descriptions. A very deep write my friend. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: depression, suicide, suicidal, sad, poem, prose, anxiety, sadness, bipolar disorder, mental illness, mentally ill, self harm, eating disorder, psychology, self hate, self loathing, recovery, relapse

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