inanimate orphanage

inanimate orphanage

A Poem by voidsparrow
"

about a kitchen

"

i think this table

is just the right kind of table,

dont you?

and the chairs we have purchased

are lovely

the color of lost souls

now found.

i got a plate set this morning

its redish,

like dried blood on lemons.

i think i will

rescue a box of silverware

tomorrow night,

give them a new place and

new friends,

they will get along pretty well

with the placemats.

 

© 2010 voidsparrow


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
...
. whoa!!! ... and again ... whoa!!! ... sheer genius!!! ...


Posted 14 Years Ago


i love how mindless it is to read this (especially at 3am)
very simple but interesting
one thing- line 9 reddish is spelled w/ 2 d's

Posted 14 Years Ago


interesting imagery of the plate ,,my question is why not pick a subject and express some emotion on it?

Posted 14 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

139 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on July 6, 2010
Last Updated on July 9, 2010

Author

voidsparrow
voidsparrow

Renton, WA



About
i write when i am inspired to do so. the price we pay for eliminating our ignorance is, unfortunately, eliminating some of the bliss that is associated with it. truth is ephemeral. it evolves a.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..