Taken

Taken

A Poem by V.N. LaVay

A warm, gentle kiss

A careful glance

A low whisper

Your body moves closer

Your neck soft, like a peach

Your breath shallows

My fangs sink in with ease

My mouth sucks at the punctures

My tongue laps at your free flowing blood

You become limp in my arms

You begin to die slowly

You fall to the ground, dead

I've taken too much of your blood

I've left you with nothing

I've killed your soul

Farewell, my love

© 2009 V.N. LaVay


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amazing vampire love poem
much approved here ^_^

Posted 15 Years Ago


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