Sunset Bliss

A poem me,and my friend Laura made.(laura on here is Linda B. Crosby)

I sit by a tree,

as I see Jason,

walking toward me,

with a happy look in his eyes.

He sits down by my side, and puts his

arms around my waist,

as we both look off

into the distance

at the sun that's starting to set.

As we do,

I put my arms around his neck,

and pull him into

a deep, passionate kiss.

 

 

 






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Author's Note

May be cliche,but,oh well,tell me what you think.

Reviews

[L.A.]

lol it was "interesting" making this... next time we should make a longer poem.

[Camille Corbett]

........................................It was boring and unoriginal and girlish

[Alicante lullaby]

it shows your passionate side,nice,and all love,you have a lovely avatar,,,