An Elder Brothers Mistake

An Elder Brothers Mistake

A Poem by Searching 4 Serenity
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I was so foolish in the past.

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1-1: Being an elder brother is not an easy task

2: Especially when you have set a bad example

3: When you are unaware of your own behavior

4: It effects your younger siblings negatively


2-1: The impulse to be rambunctious proves all too easy

2: The desire to be alpha lingers inside them

3: Even if you have problems, you MUST remember your place

4: Hate and neglect will be engraved in your history


3-1: They will persist on seeing you for how you were in the past

2: You might have changed, but the inflicted scars are still fresh

3: Brotherly relation is a valuable treasure

4: So, do not be quick to make an elder brothers mistake


4-1: Be a good example. Let them learn from your failures

2: To envy their success is to haste your own achievements

3: Learn from one another and grow on each others wisdom

4: The link between brothers is a crucial key for strong families

© 2011 Searching 4 Serenity


Author's Note

Searching 4 Serenity
Let this be an encouragement for all elder brothers/sisters.

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Totally true. I'll use it as reference with my younger brother

Posted 13 Years Ago


So true! Excellent write!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 19, 2011
Last Updated on April 13, 2011
Tags: Brothers, Sisters, Elder, Family, Prosper, Spirit, Positivity, Good Example, Enlightening

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Searching 4 Serenity
Searching 4 Serenity

Canaan, CT



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