Awkward

Awkward,

I feel so awkward

standing in the rain alone,

soaked.

Awkward,

I feel so awkward among people that 

I don't know.

Awkward,

I feel so awkward when I can't 

think of anything so say

to someone I admire.

Awkward,

I feel so awkward that I really

want to just go to 

sleep.

Author's Note

Not a proper poem. Just something that I wrote out of "awkwardness".

Reviews

[Steve Kittell]

Awkwardness inside and out ... salvation. good premise, nice

[little thoughts]

it really is awkward and the name suits it well :]

[Deaidre Newby]

Personally, I do not think there is no such thing as a proper poem form. When I write, I do not like subjecting myself to the rules of writing, i.e. format, grammar, spelling, etc. To me, such popular structure hinders the artistic, creative side and the real beauty of writing. I can hear my English teachers screaming and turning over in their graves at this very moment. ;) Any rate, I really like your poem Awkward. Definitely relatable.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wonderful "awkwardness" really lead us sometimes...

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!
..]

Hmmmmmm........I never feel awkward when I get close to anyone(I only spent my life with a childhood friend)