Breaking Hearts

My heart breaks into a thousand pieces

knowing that I have tried so hard

and yet

to get failure's punch.

Reviews

[Pen_&_Paper]

It's short, so short but so meaningful. I want to read more of it, understand more of what're you trying to say. Still, I like it so short. Thanks for writing.

[Matching Socks]

Aww. This one is a cute little write. I actually love the very short little one's that pack a big punch.
:) you did a great job expressing yourself.

Well done. :)

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!
..]

I......I.....this..is short.....I...sorry,I don`t know what to say

[Kurayami]

It's okay. I'm not very good at writing poems.

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀]

I know that feelings

[Matching Socks]

I disagree. Your poem is good. :)
The thing is, there's no good or bad, right or wrong.
It's just people's opinions. Keep it up you guys. ;)