My Angel

You are my angel.

You watch over me when I go to school

You sat quietly beside me at nights so that I won't be scared

You laughed quietly when I did something funny

You lend me your shoulder when I cry

You protect me from harm

You cared for me even when I didn't acknowledge you.

Thank you for everything, my angel.

Author's Note

Please review!

~Yvette

Reviews

[Tech]

I enjoy this one, perfectly words how I feel about my older brother who died when he was only 3 weeks old.

[WhereItResides]

Very short and simple, but that works best for these types of poems. You built the connection and that is exactly what you needed to do.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful We all have a Guardian Angel you know :)



Thank you for sharing this lovely piece and thank you for you kind
review and comments.


Blessings. kindred poet

[MoriartyMesa]

I wanna say BBD warned me https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YejxyaFyUHc love and obsession.

[Pen_&_Paper]

I really like it, the guardian angel theme. It is sweet and the way you've written it is touching. You feel the connection and yet it is so simple. Well done, I like it quite a lot.

[Sofiko Emiry]

Heartily written. Favorite Angel theme.

[Margaret Purslow]

Lovely Yvette! I would say that you should just watch your tenses, but a good attempt. Well done.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Good one! Angels are few but feels like they are always new...