Falling for the Devil: Chapter 1

Falling for the Devil: Chapter 1

A Chapter by Violet
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Hello peoples! Please excuse the errors and stuff please! Also make sure to read the next chapter! Dont worry it will be interesting (if it isnt now!)

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"Violet my love."

 

 

I shivered as the wind whipped my hair across my face. The darkness melted around him. His dark brown hair floated around his face and his eyes locked with mine. He called me his love. But I was not. It was all a mistake. How could this happen?

 

 

---Few months later---

"VIOLET!!!"

 

 

I jumped at my moms voice and dropped my bowl onto the floor. It shattered into a million pieces and my mom screeched even more.

 

 

"You useless, shelfish little devil!"

 

 

I winced and held back the tears as I cleaned up. I dont know why I cried still. This has happened ever since I was ten. Thats when my dad died.

 

 

Well I better tell you about me. Im Violet Higgins (Authors Note: Thats not my last name if you were wondering!) and Im sixteen years old. I have long black hair to my waist and icy blue eyes. Im an averadge height and I dont have many friends.

 

 

I shoved the glass into the disposal and ran upstairs. It was my own place were I could get away from my abusive mom. I wish dad was here. He was kind and strong and would never let this happen.

 

 

I laid on my bed and stared at the white ceiling. I heard my phone vibrate and read the screen. It was my absolute best friend in the world: Kat.

 

 

"Hello?"

 

 

"Hey girl! Guess what?!"

 

 

I sighed. The only thing that was bad about her was that she was too loud. She was also really pretty. She had long red hair like red. It was died. And she had the biggest brown eyes ever! She was really pretty. Also her dad was a drunk.

 

 

"Ok ok what is it? Also can you stop screaming?"

 

 

"Sure ok! Well ya know Josh H? He asked me out!"

 

 

My heart stopped. Nobody knew but I had such a big crush on Josh it wasnt cool. But now it was too late.

 

 

"Thats great Kat Im really happy for you."

 

 

I swallowed the lump in my throat. I fakely (is that a word?) talked with her until she hung up. I sighed and sat infront of my computer. I dont know why I even thought about Josh. He wouldnt like to be with some depressed sixteen year old with an abusive mom. Why do I even try?

 

 

I HOPE YOU GUYS LIKED IT!!! COMMENT BELOW AND MESSAGE ME WHATCHA THINK!!!



© 2009 Violet


Author's Note

Violet
Remember the picture is Violet and sorry I said below! I didnt know it would be next to it!

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No fake is not a real word
False phony counterfeit are good replacements though
the only qualm i have about this is that if this is your whole first chapter its not complete its a good intro but...it briefly goes over things.
besides that it was pretty good
its hard to write books and even harder to start them

Posted 15 Years Ago


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No fake is not a real word
False phony counterfeit are good replacements though
the only qualm i have about this is that if this is your whole first chapter its not complete its a good intro but...it briefly goes over things.
besides that it was pretty good
its hard to write books and even harder to start them

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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