A narrative on coming of age

Hey, so far this sounds really interesting and I will definitely give it a try when it is posted. I may be jumping the gun here but with the title, may I suggest "A narrative ON coming of age" I mean both of and on work but since you use 'come OF age' it just sounds a little weird, like it's not right. This is just my opinion though, some may agree some may disagree I just thought I should let you know. I will definitely review your narrative when it comes out (if that's what you want). Anyway, best of luck, I look forward to reading more :)

Posted 6 Years Ago