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Across from You

Across from You

A Poem by Lucy

I sit across from you in a round table;
You're smoking a cigarette and lean back on the cheap lawn chair.
Untamable thick black hair with a cute smile.
Sharp jaw and sulky brown eyes.

I sit across from you in a round table;
I'm wearing a plain black tee with a baggy green jacket.
Short curly hair with bright green eyes.
Looking off in the distance, I exhale a cloud of smoke.

I sit across from you in a round table;
And you stare at her long blonde hair,
At her pink plump lips, and down her tiny tight shirt.
Listening to her cutesy soft laugh.

I sit across from you in a round table;
And my presence remains faint.
When the wind sweeps her heavenly gold locks,
The lids of my eyes weigh down as they're rimmed with sweet tears.

© 2015 Lucy


Author's Note

Lucy
stereotypical but hey, the loner life chose me.

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It makes me think of a couple who once were on fire for each other. But time changed him, he grew tired of her and now sees the attractiveness of someone else.

A sad but too often told tale. '

Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


reminds me of a story called "The Invisible Man"...no not that one....a different one...unseen in plain sight...very good poem!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lucy

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on November 25, 2015
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