"Just write...." inspired by Whitney Houston

that's it......just right.....

 

Take a breath and release,
This everlasting infinite ride of a chance,
That glides though the isles of man,
Into the infinite abyss where he is sole,
In there take a peak,
And smile at thine own,
For I am born,
Not limited by this flesh of human stalk,
In which my dwelling dines,
But together with thine Eternal smile,
We wander and embrace,
All that this world of beauty,
Could ever in its majesty send,
In that one moment,
That graced my tender heart,
To this caressed and blissful sight,
I have arrived...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[just rose.]

Reminds me so much of Gerard Manley Hopkins - being able to get in that space where something is greater than us, of course that space is always there, and sometimes feels so very far away, but it's as close as the next breath - in fact, it is the breath itself. It's that eternal longing while on earth that can never be perfectly realized, but in those glimpses when it is - the words we find for that are anointed.

[Everett DeValle]

Good thoughts, Father...I must write. :)

[Tony]

As we near alignment with the galactic center, the creative angels fly.
Even from places I do not expect it.
Nice poem, Vincent.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

The here after when we will be freed from the confines of this earthly temple of clay and be free to float away...Felt that I could relate to this one..Let the cup of inspiration overflow and penned the overflow with ink of knowledge onto the keyboard on WritersCafe.org. and inspire us..Sunflower/Sara

[Cherrie Palmer]

My Favorite line....That glides though the isles of man, Into the infinite abyss where he is sole, In there take a peak, And smile at thine own...
But I wondered if you ment sole ( as the uner-part of the abyss or soul as the nature of man-kin) either way delightful read.

[Britt Foster]

I love this. Very good flow and pretty words.
I especially like the opening line. ^_^