only this chance

inspired by Whitney's "one moment in time."

Take a breath and release,

This everlasting infinite ride of a chance,

That glides though the isles of man,

Into the infinite abyss where he is sole,

In there take a peek,

And smile at thine own,

For I am born,

Not limited by this flesh of carnal stalk,

In which my dwelling dines,

But together with thine Eternal smile,

We wander and embrace,

All that this world of beauty,

Could ever in its majesty send,

In that one moment,

That graced my tender heart,

To this caressed and blissful sight,

I have arrived.

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

What a soothing write.

[Tony]

I like this. It is very calming.
"For I am born, not limited by this flesh of carnal stalk...."
I am just thankful that my carbon vehicle has performed so well over the years, in spite of my reckless driving.
Good Stuff!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Very captiviting write that drew me in and held my attetion...Enjoyed the expressiveness in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

[Eagle Cruagh]

It seems to make a lot of sense.
I am sure that it has a lot to do with
your next poem in which "you fall in
love".
Be careful , Vincent.

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Prateeksha Khot]

It was good to see your work after a long time