...success...

A statement

 

 

 

 

Why should I continue,
When failure is always the answer.
You should!
Because there is this little space between you and failure,
That tells me you are not failure,
You are different,
Failure comes only after existence,
Thank God not before,
Or else creation would have been a failure,
But, it is really an aspect that comes after creation,
Therefore, it is equal to neither you nor I or the other,
Neither can we be ever reduced to failure,
You like all other humans are always more than failure,
So grab this little space,
Embrace this little space,
Provided to us to make a difference,
The victory is being aware of this little space,
And using it wisely.
Therefore, come on one more try,
With this space in mind,
Thank God,
You did it!
Yes!

Author's Note

I am more than failure, you are more than failure, we are all more failure than .. we are Humans!

Reviews

[Exa Lectric]

i love this. my favorite line is "Embrace this little space" great work! :)

[Sheila Kline]

Wonderful message of reason for forging on! We do not always have the answers to why certain events occur, but if we believe in ourselves, and trust, yes TRUST the unseen, then it all might just make sense at another time!

I especially like the thought of.....
"Failure comes only after existence, Thank God not before!

You are recognizing the timing is just as it should be!

[Alex Zynder]

wow, most poems dont make you think as much as this one does.

[kjelland13]

Very nice, great wisdom for the reader. I really like this poem, thanks

[Prateeksha Khot]

Beautiful poem. I liked the way you put forth the idea of failure and the will to overcome it

[EmpressPoetess]

innovative approaches show true talent, and that's expressed here! Thoughtful motivation to uplift. Well done!

[Cordell]

WOW so much emotion :) me liky

[just rose.]

I love thinking about the little space. The little space contains a lot, doesn't it? One of those mind-expanding poems. Nice work.