...success...

A statement

 

 

 

 

Why should I continue,
When failure is always the answer.
You should!
Because there is this little space between you and failure,
That tells me you are not failure,
You are different,
Failure comes only after existence,
Thank God not before,
Or else creation would have been a failure,
But, it is really an aspect that comes after creation,
Therefore, it is equal to neither you nor I or the other,
Neither can we be ever reduced to failure,
You like all other humans are always more than failure,
So grab this little space,
Embrace this little space,
Provided to us to make a difference,
The victory is being aware of this little space,
And using it wisely.
Therefore, come on one more try,
With this space in mind,
Thank God,
You did it!
Yes!

Author's Note

I am more than failure, you are more than failure, we are all more failure than .. we are Humans!

Reviews

[r]

so true! great read

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

great write

[Gary McDonald]

You write in quite the profound style, few writers can pull it off, so it's always a treat to read from one who can. I completely agree with Lynne, your work will stay inside for many a day after reading, and when the words are composed so beautifully, the lingering sound is that much sweeter. Great write!

[theribz]

I love this piece! :)

[rachielle]

You write great optimistic poems, Vincent. I think if your poems were compiled into a book, they would make the world a better place- the people would be kinder to others and to themselves. Great piece!:)

[Ladysue]

I very much enjoyed this write. Thought provoking!

[cest la vie]

I adore a piece of writing that leaves me with little trickle down thoughts for days and days..
Your writing does that..
There is much to embrace and ponder in these intuitive lines.
So glad you are here to share with us all.

[An owl on the moon]

You inspire the heart and mind to continue on.. to find hope and depth in existence. Richly painted.

[Thomas Fleet]

A lot of your writing is real philosophical and just mind-boggling. I enjoy them immensely. It gets my mind racing!
You are a very wise writer. :)

[josephine dinnair]

never a truer word spoken with such energy xxx