...success...

A statement

 

 

 

 

Why should I continue,
When failure is always the answer.
You should!
Because there is this little space between you and failure,
That tells me you are not failure,
You are different,
Failure comes only after existence,
Thank God not before,
Or else creation would have been a failure,
But, it is really an aspect that comes after creation,
Therefore, it is equal to neither you nor I or the other,
Neither can we be ever reduced to failure,
You like all other humans are always more than failure,
So grab this little space,
Embrace this little space,
Provided to us to make a difference,
The victory is being aware of this little space,
And using it wisely.
Therefore, come on one more try,
With this space in mind,
Thank God,
You did it!
Yes!

Author's Note

I am more than failure, you are more than failure, we are all more failure than .. we are Humans!

Reviews

[Libby McKeown]

This is inspiration at its finest!

[Siguard]

true failure is one of the ingredients of success in my humble opinion, Great idea well executed

[jojo]

there is nothing wrong with failures they are great people because they tied to do something they may not success at the first time it's like learning to ride a bike or learning how to walk you will not succeed at the first time and maybe not the the second or the tenth time and that dose not make you a failure

[Jenny Nelson]

"Failure comes only after existence, Thank God not before"

I love that line. This is really a great and inspiring piece.

[Wicahpi]

Amen! I've considered myself a failure, many times.
This write gives me cause to rethink this aspect.
Thank You

[Anita B Jacques]

What is failure? only in our eyes not God's eyes. I believe that failure is not to try at all, we also need to persevere and trust Our Lord all the way. Thank you for sharing your awesome write and speaking from your heart. God Bless.
Hugs

[Coyote Poetry]

You are correct. Without failure we won't know success. Poem is outstanding. In the end of a good effort. We will be thankful. I like the wisdom in your words.
Coyote

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

This is really good

[Fallen Angel]

Although you have a valid and true point. I felt this more of a statement than a poem. I struggled to complete it. Don't get me wrong i think this could be a great poem, but definately needs a little more depth and some more work.

[Lucia Morgan]

i did not finish reading. this poem failed to keep MY attention. but you have a very true, serious point, though provoking, yes, and i think you can continue to collabortate on it.