CARNIVEL

All are in the streets with balloons, bugels, and banners...

All are Busy on Roads

All are rushed at the park

All are gathered town square

This is the new Carnival

 

All are Singing and dancing

All are Holding Placards

All are Shouting slogans

This is the new Autumn

 

All are busy befire in offices

All are busy in the colleges

All are busy in bank and business

This time all are in the streets

 

You can call this down turn

You can explain it an employment problem

You can watch this a revolution

This time all are enjoying the Mass gathering.

Reviews

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this is a poem where i can close my eyes, hear the music, see the children laughing and having a great time. listen to the elders talk about how much the kids are having fun and remebering the times that they use to do things like this when they were younger.. GREAT WRITE I LOVE IT... its everything a poem should be... making you SEEE the poem

[Aarontastic]

Good write =] I like the "all are" repetition, followed by the "You can" stanza at the end. You very much succeed in conveying the feelings of mirth and excitement in this poem with the simple, but moving declarations at the end of each stanza. I'm guessing that English is not your first language, but even with a few semantic issues here and there, the poem still works and reads really well.

[SM Davis]

A nice change from the economic down turn I imagine. Nicely written.

[IceDragonOfPluto]

I can imagine the busy people. Great write.

[Muse]

Bring on the cotton candy...nicely penned. :)

[LadyKarissa]

I use to live in Brazil and attend Carnival right before Lent began.
I was a great time and people liked carnival because they were allowed to do whatever they wanted to do within the boundaries of the law and eating meat.
Carnival means meat eaters. Lucie