Water In the MOON

All the lovers deeply attached with the moom, the cooly sensation and sentiments..

Dear Moon

In the lonley sleepless night

You are with me

Sharing my dense silence

 

You Filled and coloured

Her cheeks beauty

With the shining nights

Walking miles to sand

 

We only share with you

For the millions of years

Our Joy, Romance, Agony

And tiredness

 

But We never thought

While digging your heart

For find out the water

Our tears match.

 

 

Author's Note

Moon impact.. Millions of lovers shares their love with there loved ones with the beautiful moon, but now badly demolished their imagination,

Reviews

[Muse]

I watched this event closely. I don't think it was to just find water....I don't even think this mission had good intentions. But it bothered me just how many people did not even know about this! I loved the inspiration behind this poem...WELL DONE! xo

[msharma]

Influencing poem,really moon symbolizes the love,but the last lines sketches the personified pain,the moon bears.

[Dreamer]

This is a beauitful piece with wonderful imagination. Greatly enjoyed the truth u presented. always looking at things one sided

[Brittany Russum]

I loved this poem it is deep and something we all feel. Good Job

[....]

Yes! Love the last stanza, so much truth there and feeling.....xo