Pieces (Part 1 of 3 )

Pieces (Part 1 of 3 )

A Poem by heartsinice
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Part 1 of a 3 series of poems.

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You left me holding all the pieces after you broke me
I'm not even sure I have them all
If not, there will always be a piece of me missing 
Now there is only memories of how you use to hold me 
With attention to detail,  you would never allowed a crack in our love
What changed to were you handled us so carelessly?
When I felt your grip loosening I turned a blind eye 
Now the blame is my own for being blindsided from this decision 
You left me holding all the pieces  

© 2018 heartsinice


Author's Note

heartsinice
PART 2 will come after 50 reviews are given on this segment

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Wonderful and powerful use of words and thoughts. Glass heart will be broke and never be complete again. I did like the poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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In that case we've got millions of masterpieces existing on the earth!
Well, deadline of 50 reviews for part two?! That'd do much delay nor twill happen too sooner...G'luck! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

keep going, I'd like to see more

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really heart breaking
I have also been through this too
I hope this doesn't affect you
Pls move on

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heartsinice

6 Years Ago

I am sorry that you had to experience this pain! I pray for your healing! I haven't gone through thi.. read more

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Added on August 12, 2018
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heartsinice

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