The Fear

came up with this on a bus. would like any constructive criticism.

(Verse 1)

A terrible plague has come upon this age

In the form of a humanitarian sage

While still in this world he will not quit

Until the people are ground into the grit and spit

Taking the form of a friend

Your life it can distend

(Pre-chorus)

Don't you dare take it while lying down

Or you'll end up in a hospital gown

It's vitally draining

Infectious and paining

Stand strong to come out alive!

(Chorus)

It consumes and swallows into madness

You cannot escape the grasp, its helpless!

Standing next to you and whispering into your ear,

You will become enveloped in fear!

(Verse 2)

Make sure you can survive your fragility,

Avert the futility

That life hands you on a silver platter

If you're disliked but alive, then why the f**k does it matter?!

Author's Note

probably gonna add more to it, so i guess this is a rough draft.

Reviews

[Danielle]

Very nice! It flows smoothly and my favorite line is " If you're disliked but alive, then why the f**k does that matter?! Nice work!