Burning Alive

A Poem by Vincent

a song i came up with. i appreciate feedback.

(1st verse)

Now I'm contemplating murder in the seventh degree
I'll rip out your eyes so you can never see
What I have become and where you have failed
While you continue down the same bloody trail.

You think you can phase anyone with anything you do?
As you're lying through your teeth, i know the truth.

(Pre-Chorus)

You're a fake

You can't take

Anything thrown at you

When you're caught, you take your face

And change up what you do

You're pathetic,

A f****n joke
You might as well

Give it up

Your life is a hoax

Now keep your mouth f****n shut
(Chorus)
Here we are just Burning Alive

All you're doing is f*****g up my life

Because of your face

Can't keep up with the pace

So get out of my way or shut the hell up and die!
(2nd verse)
Don't get mad at me

For revealing all your lies.

If you had stayed honest

You could've had a better prize

Now that you're alone with the way you behave

I can laugh as you dig your own f****n grave

(Bridge)

While you're rotting in that hole

You still think you have control

As you're crawling out of hell, confused and utterly dazed

You realize you're fucked from all the debts you have to pay

Don't worry, i'll guide you by your hand.

Back to where it all began.

With your head underneath my foot!
(repeat chorus twice)

© 2012 Vincent

Author's Note

still a work in progress

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RachelReaper

Is this a death metal song? Because if it is, it definitely fits the genre, I think your lyric choice screams "anger" and if that is what you wanted to portray, you did an excellent job.