Think They Can Act

Tough Crowd

Taking the stage in grand costume

Flouncing their tails blue and red

Talking in twangs to an audience 

Of golden cherry-eyed rats

Who snicker under eyebrows flat

A melody shrieks and the actor falls down

His actress shouldn't now run to his side

The prediction of a play seen frequently

Abruptly stalls and breaks all lewdness

As the noisy front row stops to peek

The air thickens with sweat and fog

Beating of hand fans the only sound

Actor and lady now laying still

Tails scattered and waiting for the wind

Or the hero of the previous set

Too evocative for the verminous seats

Rustling is too much to feel

Catatonic motions and worried expressions

Smiling couple had made them feel

Warmth for moments until the curtain falls

Reviews

[HereComesTheSun]

Well done. One grammar mistake but besides that it is fine.