Tartare

You say you’re a vegetarian,

So why did you make tartare

Out of my heart?

Reviews

[Jibey]

Great economy of words in this kind of haiku... with the coup de grace: 'out of my heart'. An arresting and powerful image.

[Victoriana]

Thanks, Jibey! Some of your comments sound more impressive than my writing..!:) I can only appreciate it :)

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Great way to say this person tore your heart into little pieces. I love this piece. N.

[Victoriana]

thank you very much, always glad to see others enjoy my work:)