Discoveries

I closed the door to the world behind my back,

I locked myself behind my ribs

I dug into never ending web of

Arteries and veins and let the stream

Of my own blood carry me around and show me

Who I really am. 

Reviews

[Chrys Marie]

This is unlike anything that I've read before. Intriguing and very poetic, nicely done!

[Victoriana]

Thank you very much, dear. I'm very happy to hear you've enjoyed it.

[J.Arthur.B]

really like it, although I will classified as poetry. but to be honest, this many type of labels are tricky.
congrats on this one

regards

[Victoriana]

Thanks for the support, it's always appreciated!

[Jibey]

How hard it is to know ourselves... How good to be still and let life teach us

[Victoriana]

good, but hard, because we have a habit of trying to control everything..!:)