The Queen

Tired of all the city has to offer,

With enough paper and authority - 

To preserve our egos,

Driven by thirst for the dangerous,

We jump into tide of each other madness.

Passing lights hypnotize my spirit,

While Civic flies through the streets

I hand you a beer and with smirk you answer

-You’re gonna love this, Lupita.

As stripper spreads her legs for a flip

I feel the intensified heart beat

And your hand on my thigh proves that

For tonight I’m your Queen of Cocaine

Reviews

[Jibey]

I liked the idea of escaping from the stuffiness and bureaucracy of city and enjoying moments of personal intimacy. The smirk of the guy says it all. The line 'As stripper spreads her legs for a flip' is striking and expresses well the woman's anticipation... ' the 'intensified heart beat'. He wants his fix and your thigh is the way in.

I thought this was so well conceived... Getting away from the routine and mundane into the intensity and high of seduction and the blast of orgasm.

[Victoriana]

I like how you interpret this work:)) me and this man had some crazy times. I'm glad if I'm able to portray at least even a bit of one of our nights..:)