A Life and A Cigarette Bud

Once upon a time in a place called society there was a very beautiful and most admirable shop called Peace. Every citizen of The society used to visit that shop to buy peace.

 

One day a guy named Life met with another guy named Cigarette Bud at the Peace shop.

Life and Cigarette Bud stroke a conversation together about how they are treated by Humans who are one of the citizens of society. They had few things in common like both ends up when humans are done with enjoying them. Humans think that both are of little importance as compared to their other requirements. They don’t show respect towards both of them and at times treat them harshly. Both get fire and ash at the end of its existence.

 

Life wanted peace because Humans don’t want it. They are busy in Wars with each other and peace is something which is difficult to get in their lives but Cigarette Bud had a different story.

 

Cigarette Bud wanted peace because a lot of humans are killing them with fire in order to get out of stress, pressure and grief they are living in.

 

They asked for peace from the shop but they were the only two customers

Who were denied of it as they are the only medium for humans to talk about and

Rejuvenate their moments of existence.

 

After this rejection Life and Cigarette Bud decided to be true friends and made a decision to leave the society.

 

They left for a place called Heaven where they lived happily ever after.

Reviews

[consistentwritin]

Interesting. After a quick read, I didn't fully catch the life-bud metaphor. Do you think you could work on it a little more? Or maybe I should read it again.

The "low" score is because I built rather high expectations during the story about what life and the cigarette bud represent.