Vacant

Vacant

A Poem by Viju
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Love, Alt, F4

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Be the mood

I am describing

As masks tile one upon the other

Be what I want you to be.

Leave your face on the floor of your apartment.

Shut the door loudly

On its (your) sad face. Then,

Come to me

As a naked new-born

Let me show you the ways of being,

living, loving and making  love.

Then when I want my peace

I flick my fingers

And you disappear

Like a closed 'window'

You, the object of my desires

Shall then cease to exist

my love.

 

© 2013 Viju


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I really, really love this. The idea of wanting someone around only when it suits you, I can completely relate. xD My favorite stanza was from "I flick my fingers" on. (: Very great stuff here. Favorite for sure!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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