Oblivion

Sometimes you just want to sink.

                                                                          Oblivion                                                                              

         

My pain is my own,

Yet you stand there with your pity,

And "I know how you feel"

How could you? Why would you want to?

I wish to feel numb safe from this torment,

And you want to "understand this feeling"

I want to be appreciative and grateful,

For your kindness but I'm hurt,

And you don't understand,

And no, you have no inkling of my sorrow,

Leave me be,

Let me drown in nothingness.

And if you are my friend,

And you want to ease my pain,

You will meet me on the other side,

Where your kindness isn't like a thorn,

Digging deeper into my wound,

But a healing salve on my aching heart.

Author's Note

Maybe you don't always know what someone is going through.Contrary to what you think.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

OH GAWD I wish I had written this, and EXACTLY. I always try to see beyond the angst, we all have our own demons, and there's a reason behind it. We won't let you drown though Vidya. Shot right between the eyes with this one....!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Freida your words always mean so much to me and I am glad that my words could touch you.I know you won't let me and I am learning to swim so I'm fine :)

[Frieda P]

If you need a lifeline, I know this really hot lifeguard. ;) haha

Sending you a squishy hug too just in case....x

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha squishy hugs are always welcomed as are really hot lifeguards.Even better squishy hugs from really hot lifeguards haha

[Frieda P]

Ha ha I shouldn't known you'd say that!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes you should have, what are you getting a little slow in your old age haha

[Frieda P]

OMG bite your pazzo tongue woman! haha

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha tongue been bitten.You know we live in neverland chica with peter pan you hear not Michael Jackson lol