The Song Of Seduction

The lure of the darkness

                                                       The song of seduction

Come into my seductive web,

Wrap yourself inside my twisted verse,

Sacrifice your misguided loyalties,

Let them burn on reality's  pyre. 

It's so easy for you to embrace the darkness,

You were always wary of the light,

They claim to despise us,

Even as their jealousy drips green poison onto the floor.

I won't pretend to be a saint,

Just to quiet the venomous whispers,

I am who I am,

Comfortable in my own skin.

Come join me take my hand,

Follow the sound of my melodious lure,

Strumming along the edges of your sanity,

Welcome me in and loneliness shall never fell you again.

Author's Note

Just a thought :)

Reviews

[Rocans]

Yep, quite a good write. You used some beautiful lines in this one namely: "Wrap yourself inside my twisted verse" and "Follow the sound of my melodious lure, strumming along the edges of your sanity"
I thought those lines were spectacular.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you muchly Rocans :)

[willweb]

Oh my Vidya, this is an invitation to love. You really colored this one nicely. You are a wonderful poet. I loved this one.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Will glad you liked it :)

[ron]

It sounds like the perfect place to be.
Well written Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Red one ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Red one ;-)

[ron]

You are most welcome Vidya.

[Einstein Noodle]

ooooooooooo from me too! well done says i! i could hear the sirens as i read and by the last verse i am drifting off into the spell .. nicely done ..title to end!
E.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you E Noodle you made me laugh. Glad my words cast their spell ;-)

[AprilRN1210]

oooooooh you wicked, naughty girl.. I always knew you had it in you... What a web you weave here with your words... I can feel the heat and the power dripping off every word... the melodious whispers you have lured us in with this write are equisite.. Very nicely done...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you ma'am.You are way to kind but I'm keeping your words they are mine lol

[AprilRN1210]

lol... you keep em ma'am.. they are truly deserved here.. you are awesome ma'am... ((hugs)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hugs Sweet month of the year.Thank you again ;-)

[Kayleigh]

Girl this has been written to perfection. This very descriptive, you've left me in awe, well done, Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Kayleigh you are so kind.

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow quite a thought. So many potent thoughts here. Yes kindred spirits we are indeed. One thing, assuming you meant the pyre to be owned by reality, it should be reality's pyre.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you cat that is what I meant.I will fix :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Always a pleasure to read and assist.:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh yes the bark side does have a certain appeal… a very seductive poem that drew me in from beginning until the end.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Cowboy Dale you are the best :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Actually I am the worst but thank you :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha whatever :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I am just trying to be modest :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Clearly a sultry siren's call written in smooth and articulate and descripive verse!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you John just a thought :)