Dear Coffee

If coffee were a man I would be a stalker.

                                                                Dear coffee,

I just want to say I'm your biggest fan,

You can always be found hot and black in my hands,

I've tried your cousins chocolate and tea,

But those guys are so not for me.

They don't have your color or taste on my tongue,

I mean come on they aren't black they're brown.

Don't look at me like that I'm proclaiming my love,

I even brought my favorite mug.

You seem scared but its alright,

I didn't come here to start a fight,

No need to call security I'll behave,

I wonder if you'll be so kind to walk into this cage,

Fine,fine,I understand your dubious glance,

All will be fine just give me as chance,

I just happen to have some water and sugar,

Would you mind lending me a finger?

Sigh all my best laid plans have gone amiss,

Because you my beloved refuse to cooperate,

And let me whisk you away far away from here,

To a place where your caffeine I would never have to share.

Author's Note

Lol..what? I was just being a goof :)

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

I love this write, so nicely written and creative

[hardeep sabharwal]

:), I do like coffee but not always :P

an enjoyable read here,, thanks for writing :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol ......?thank you Hardeep just being Looney :-)

[Beccy]

As long as he's not instant, I like to take my time over coffee. -:)

Beccy.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha true that.I love to savor mine as well :)

[Ifreakinloveyou]

Love this. As a coffee-love myself and that it's fun and quirky :) Thanks for sharing this!!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol....thank you for reading my Looney lines ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Your strap line is blinding! Made me laugh so much (If coffee were a man I would be a stalker.) I love the intent of this piece but it loses its way a little and the metering goes wrong in places as does the syntax. For example:
Sigh all my best laid plans have gone amiss,
Because you my beloved refuse to cooperate,
And let me whisk you away far away from here,
To a place where your caffeine I would never have to share.

Sigh!, all my best laid plans have gone amiss,
Because you my beloved refuse to comply,
but let me whisk you away from here,
To a place where your caffeine I would never share.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol thank you John.I did say goofy .I did go a little off in those parts you mentioned .Say what its just a little coffee craze.Thank you again for taking the time to read and review my work it is deeply appreciated :)

[Enayet1999]

Great poem. i love it, it's absolutely magnificant

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol thank you Enayet I was just fooling around :)

[Kayleigh]

Mmmmm coffee, yum yum in my tum!! Jeez, how I do love coffee and I agree with your little subtitle thingy up the top -- I'd be a stalker too! Loved this one, I am smiling so much right now (drinking coffee funnily enough, it should be a sin to wake up this early)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol...thank you Kayleigh I'm an early riser but I still need my coffee :)

[Rita L. Sev]

:) This one gets a big smile - you can never go wrong with an ode to the Dark Master as far as I'm concerned! Thanks for the chuckle, Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Rita so glad I made you laugh :)

[willweb]

Sounds good to me, I am dragging a little this afternoon. Very fun poem today Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Will it was fun to write :)