Burning Desires

Lovers in flames.

                                                              Burning Desires

                                            A collaboration with Jonathan Edward Furches

We, don’t have to worry about nothing,

The fire rages in my eyes that you see,

You lift my spirits like a chaotic breeze,

We burn ,burn ,burn,

Setting free to the clouds in the wind,

Wrapping me up in this giddy spin.

Rising from the ashes,

Both of us together like a phoenix,

I know that feeling burning in your eyes,

I know you're the truth inside of the lies.

Fingers entwined ablaze with emotion,

We burn,burn,burn.  

We cant let go ,

Setting up like fire a smoke never cold,

Hand in hand is what we see ,

Burning in flesh with remedy.

You inflame me and course through my veins,

Your loving is the sweetest pain,

You take the lead and then its my turn ,

You make me smolder I embrace the burn.

But we, we don't have to worry about nothing ,

because we have one hell of a something,

They, they will see the fire in our eyes,

Because it's what sets us free.

Author's Note

Another collaboration with my friend Jon who's trying to help me get rid of the cobwebs.

Reviews

[Simran Kewlani]

This is really good. Like really. The figures of speech used amaze me. I really like it. It's like a professional piece.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You little lady are the best.Thank you Simmy :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Not sure I like the double negative of "We don't have to worry about nothing" but the rest of the collaboration is well written. Playful and sexy seduction in every line. The two of you blend ink well. Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol...thank you Lady Lydi.I wasn't too sure about that line either.

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Well I did that and based it off a song , it can always be taken out!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol....you okay there Jon?

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I reakon Vidya

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well good.Morning :)

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Morning Vidya

[Jetta Zippora]

Fiery, sassy, gorgeous write. It is just good strong writing. Well penned and well said.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Jetta :)

[Woody]

Batman and Robin strike again!! the whole thing is damn good but this is my favourite
"you take the lead and then it's my turn
you make me smoulder, I embrace the burn"

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol...of course you love those lines my sweet friend.Thank you Sir Woody your words always mean a lot :)

[ron]

Wow. Full of burning passion...sighs.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Red :)

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[MsJewel]

You lift my spirits like a chaotic breeze,
We burn ,burn ,burn,
The images you have created are steamy, soft and sensual...filled with passion. A beautiful collaboration by two outstanding poets.

:) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so very much Jules.Jon is very easy to work with :)

[Frieda P]

I'm not quite sure how a chaotic disease lifts your spirits but I got the BURN part. ;) Lots of hot stuff and feisty fiery feelings going down here, you guys should have a fire extinguisher on hand. Nice collaboration again you two!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha you have a point there chica but who knows when you're on fire already and enjoying it why should'nt you toss in a chaotic disease in there for good measure lol.Thank you chica you are the best :)

[Frieda P]

Since I had a fever two days ago, I recognized the burn, but mine wasn't as much fun as yours apparently haha :) Was my pleasure....

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol....it was fun.I hope you are better chica that burn ain't no fun.

[Frieda P]

Yep I'm fine thanks, the hazards of being around rugratz all the time....

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well gotta love those rugratz even if they floor us with their viruses lol

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Thanks Frieda :))))))))))))

[Frieda P]

No doubt, but when you're surrounded by 90 of them, there's no escaping it!

My pleasure Jon. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I am sorry chica but 3 is my limit 4 if I drink a mad bull lol

[Frieda P]

HA...I have three, the rest are borrowed only during the week thank gawd lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha yes I also have 3 that seem to be high most of the time.I wonder where they get all this energy maybe they also drink mad bull to deal with me lol.My daughter will be 11 next week and my boys are 9 and 5 and trying to drive me up a wall I'm sure lol

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Smiles another fine poem cobwebs gone now:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Vidya Bacchus]

I hope so but its too soon to tell.Thank you Jon :)

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Smilessssssssss in the milesssssssssssss welcome :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Miles of smiles :)