Soulmates

Just because .....

                                               Soul Mates

What you mean to me I can't explain,

The giddy ecstasy and sweetest pain,

The push and pull ,the tug of war,

Your drugged kisses leave me craving more.

You are my protector and my addiction,

My seducer and redemption,

You make me laugh until I cry,

You make me howl you make me sigh.

I  call  your name and you appear,

You delight me and dry my tears,

You can drive me stark raving mad,

But it breaks your heart to shards whenever I'm sad.

I gave you my heart and you hold its key,

You looked in my eyes and promised  me,

"I may make you cry but I'll  make you laugh much more,

And I'll never walk away from you and out the door."

"I will love you and hold you until my last breath,

Our story is written ,our course already set,

You'll never walk alone in this big ,bad world

Because you are the other half of me that makes me whole."

Author's Note

A really lovely song inspired this one.

Reviews

[BlackRose]

Such a lovely heartful declaration of love for another. Great rhyming. Wonderful piece. Who's the lucky one in your life, eh? ;o)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.....hey Rose how you doing girl.Thank you for your sweet review.The lucky one is my husband and I never let him forget how lucky he is I'm quite a catch hahaha :)

[BlackRose]

Same here dear. I never let mine forget either, lol. We are the catch of the day evetyday! Doing good and you? Anytime, you're very welcome. :o)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I am great girl.Yes we are the catch of the day everyday lol.I love that.

[BlackRose]

.......:o)

[Kayleigh]

Vidya, I adore this. It is heaven when you feel (or even know) that you have completely found the man for you. I feel this way about Dale and he is the sweetest... I won't get all soppy on you but just know I can so relate to this right now.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol....thank you Kayleigh you are not soppy at all just honest and happy :)

[kublakhan27]

I didn't realize I was reading a rhyme scheme until I got to the second-to-last stanza, which is a good thing...it speaks to the command of your flow...you've thoroughly left me in awe with the seamless juxtapositions defining love's double-edged sword...a great work from start to finish my friend, well done :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so very much KK .You are so very kind :)

[Eve Ola]

A very beautiful indeed. very captivating. The ending is awesome.

"I will love you and hold you until my last breath,
Our story is written ,our course already set,
You'll never walk alone in this big ,bad world
Because you are the other half of me that makes me whole."

well done Vidya :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much Eve :)

[Eve Ola]

your welcome :)

[Woody]

sweet and tender declaration of love. your phrasing is superb, Vid.
the poor man stands no chance. he's ensnared

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.....shh Woody we can't let him know lol.Thank you sweet friend :)

[KWP]

such beauty and love within your words ... aww what a nice poem to start the day with on my Sunday morn, so full of hope and happiness...

really nice flow to match the content too

Thank you soul sista x x

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you K for this lovely review .It made me smile :)

[MsJewel]

I believe in soulmates - you are lucky you found yours.
Your poem is lovely
Because you are the other half of me that makes me whole."
Absolutely stunning!

:) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Jules.Yes I am very lucky because he does indeed complete me :)

[Rose Whte]

I think it was really sweet and hope to one day to find my soul mate.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Rose and I am sure you will :)

[Edward Lancheister]

great love poem i ever read. my favorite line "Your drugged kisses leave me craving more." really well written

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow thank you so very much Edward.I am so glad you liked it :)