Soulmates

Just because .....

                                               Soul Mates

What you mean to me I can't explain,

The giddy ecstasy and sweetest pain,

The push and pull ,the tug of war,

Your drugged kisses leave me craving more.

You are my protector and my addiction,

My seducer and redemption,

You make me laugh until I cry,

You make me howl you make me sigh.

I  call  your name and you appear,

You delight me and dry my tears,

You can drive me stark raving mad,

But it breaks your heart to shards whenever I'm sad.

I gave you my heart and you hold its key,

You looked in my eyes and promised  me,

"I may make you cry but I'll  make you laugh much more,

And I'll never walk away from you and out the door."

"I will love you and hold you until my last breath,

Our story is written ,our course already set,

You'll never walk alone in this big ,bad world

Because you are the other half of me that makes me whole."

Author's Note

A really lovely song inspired this one.

Reviews

[Terpsichore]

A great inspiration. We all desire the other half that makes us whole, we don't all get our wish come true though.

T

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so very much T.In time maybe we do :-)

[Rob Santana]

This is beautiful!! Truly reminds me of someone I know and love very much. This piece sends out so much passion and love. You have a beautiful way with words Vidya......

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Rob.I appreciate your kind words very much.Glad to know the emotions came through :)

[Master K-tops]

That really lovely song has inspired an even lovelier poem of absolute perfection. I mostly feel bad about commenting on something as perfect,but I actually believe that this poem of yours is without fault. The message is crystal-clear,the diction is smooth, the mood is infectious and the rhymes are intact. What more could one ask for? This is amazing,Vid.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so much Master K you have made my day with your wonderful review :)

[Master K-tops]

:D. That makes me soooo glad!

[Vidya Bacchus]

...........:)

[Master K-tops]

And oh,could you please check out my latest poem? I'd be grateful.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol....will do :)

[Simran Kewlani]

An that lovely song inspired a beautiful lady to write a beautiful poem. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awww you are too sweet Simmy.Thank you my sweet :)

[Jetta Zippora]

Powerful and touching. Beautifully penned, friend. I can't wait to read more of your writing. I know what that feels like...reading your poem brings all the emotions to me.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so very much for your very kind reviews Jetta Z :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮This is wonderful, and how love should be. You sometimes drive each other crazy but you'd still do anything for one another. Great work!╰☆╮

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Britt :)

[Fire Mage Andrea]

I've heard songs that have given me ideas too.
This beautiful poem looks like something romantic between two people who in love/love each other

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much fire mage :)

[Lydia Shutter]

This would make a great set of lyrics for a love song....or a great set of vows at a wedding ceremony! The rhyming and rhythm are flawless and the sentiment is sweet and romantic. Wonderful work. Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so very much sweet Lydi :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah love is a many splendid thing. Good poem Vidya

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Baby :)